This week, Junior 5 have written creative pieces of writing. The children had a choice of two tasks: to imagine themselves as an animal (that they admire) and create a piece of writing about what a day might look like from that animal’s perspective, or to continue a story called The Secret Heart, which we used for a comprehension last week. There were so many different animals – we had birds, cats, dogs, horses, foxes, snakes, guinea pigs and even a monkey. The children were also tasked with using interesting details to show how their animal might look at life and to incorporate DADWAVERS!
Here are some examples of the children's writing:
Description: ‘bright orange fur shining in the iridescent moonlight’
Adverb Start: ‘Sleepily, I stretched out my furry arms.’ Fox
Estimation of time: ‘Later that day when I had just swallowed my water, I heard the hunter and my heart stopped. I was terrified.’